Wednesday, March 31, 2010

I wish to be (Poem)

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This one is for the fans of my poems. Hope you like, enjoy!

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I wish to be
The music of your soul
Like the chorus of birds
Serenading you at dawn

I wish to be
The smile on your face
Caused by the sweet nothings
Whispered into your ears

I wish to be
The beating of your heart
The gentle rhythm-like throbbing
Deep inside your breast

I wish to be
The sunlight in your life
Like the mild morning rays
When you open the window blinds

I wish to be
All that you’ve dreamt of
All that you’ve hoped for
A gift of love forever






22 comments:

  1. "...a gift of love"

    Myne, you are giftef, where do you get all these peoms...

    1st
    yes!

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  2. i wish to be the best thing dats hapened to u. The one after ur heart. And the one u'l spend ur life with. I SERIOUSLY WANA SAY THESE WORDS TO SUM1.

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  3. Tisha she gets all dese lovely poems from her lovely mind.

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  4. I love this poem, reminds me of the book of solomon, all those juicy writings, I like,

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  5. Don't we all wish to be this for someone who is the same towards us in return? God help us all sha. You write beautifully, Myne. I want to be like you when I grow up! lol

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  6. Thank you all, the words come when the feelings are there.

    @F you already write well yourself. Thanks dear.

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  7. Ms. Faithful Reader I love it when you do the poems. I need to comment more on them. It puts me in a place of calmness and creativity for me. I can read it how I want too. Keep the poems coming!

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  8. Ms. Faithful Reader I love it when you do the poems. I need to comment more on them. It puts me in a place of calmness and creativity for me. I can read it how I want too. Keep the poems coming!

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  9. I love this. I wish to be this

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  10. @Shels, Lady A and Suru, thanks so much.

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  11. awwwwwwwwwww....dis is lovely...me sef i wish o...

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  12. I like my ballads light in texture, quick in pace and totally unpretentious in diction. You have achieved all 3 here, so this poem works like a dream for me. Well done, Myne.

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  14. and I wish someone would say all these to me and mean them (*sighs*)

    Lovely poem...makes me pause and think

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  15. "The music of your soul"...

    Speechless.

    Well done..your skill with the pen is so admirable.. :)

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  16. My head is swelling but I have remain here on the ground. Thank you all so much.

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  17. Wish to be the world to someone.
    Love this

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  18. This is beautiful, Myne. You definitely have a way with words. I admire your talent.

    Tasha

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