Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Vision of Love (Poem)

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It seems like a dream
But I remain awake and sane
I tremble at the sight before me
What could this possibly be?
I am as a parched land
Soaking up the drenching rain
I am like a dew-fresh flower
Smiling at the rising sun

It is your wonderful face
So far and yet also near
I stand joyfully before you
My vision of true love
Love so completely amazing
It defies verbal description
Love so all-embracing
It is totally beyond mention






15 comments:

  1. Your poem makes me think of the lyrics to John Legend's song ' when its cold outside'. Good job.

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  2. *wimp* This is too sweet.

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  3. why am i confused with the words...so near yet so far?, makes me think maybe its dedicated to a long distant lover or to God.

    I like all the same, I'm a sucker for anything that has to do with love...lol

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  4. @Jhazmyn, it was written when love was some distance away.

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  5. Thank you all, it's a poem for the season. Enjoy and have a wonderful valentine.

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  6. "it defies verbal description"

    best line cos i think love is so deviant!

    mw ur campaign is workin o, got me feelin all melancholic!

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  7. "I am as a parched land
    Soaking up the drenching rain
    I am like a dew-fresh flower
    Smiling at the rising sun" - i love this part!

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  8. I just hateee val.. seems to be what i meet on almost everyone's post. I have to endure, yeah? ok.. nice one.. but you know you always do good write ups...take care.
    www.askchacha4free.blogspot.com

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  9. Nice!

    I could just picture that parched land soaking up the rain!

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  10. Myne, wen i get older i'l jst write like u. Lol

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  11. "I am like a dew-fresh flower
    Smiling at the rising sun"

    could quite visualise a sun-flower opening up to the morning sun.. why a sunflower, i don't know but this was beautiful

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